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Thursday, June 12, 2008

my turn

having read lizes poem the other day i remembered one i did a while back. now i have never tried to be a poet but, one day an idea for one popped into my head. i have no expectation of quality on this, its just a short little diddy i put down. i know some wont like it because it rhymes. i know, how boring, a poem that rhymes. but, for what its worth, i think you will see some truth in it(at least the line about me talking to much) and i like it so there.


Now I write upon this pad
Words of wisdom from your dad

I will tell you all I may
So you need to listen to the words I say

I hear you gasp and see you roll your eyes
You say I talk too much and this you despise

I have a lot of things going on in my head
But I may keep it to my self instead

I might learn to hold my tongue as you say I should
But someday you may decide my talk was good

My words that were then tedious and so much ado
In the future may seem very important to you

When that day comes if I no longer live
I have still this advice to give

Of all the knowledge that I may have had to impart
I’ll say what I believe with all my heart

It is good to be strong enough to fight
To face the foe will all your might

But when life troubles their ugly face have shone
It is much harder if you must go it alone

Those who have been truly blessed know this to be true
Life is much sweeter with a good woman next to you

So when troubled times start to draw near
Try never to cower in fear

And if the trials of life have you floored
Stand next to your wife with faith in the Lord

20 comments:

Dana Cheryl said...

Bruce I'm impressed. Wow! It just goes to show we all have many facets to our personality. Thanks for sharing. Very nice!

lizS said...

well i think it sucked. thanks for ruining my life.

timpani76 said...

It's funny you mentioned rhyming, since Erik refuses to write a poem that does not rhyme. He thinks it does not really seem like poetry unless it rhymes.

And, actually, most of Shakespeare's sonnets rhyme, you just have to know which line to emphasize.

Bruce said...

like i said its more of a diddy than a poem. although im sure there is a name for the type of thing i wrote.

Bruce said...

"my three friends" by louis lamour

I hav three friends, three faithful friends,
more faithful could not be-
and every night, by the dim firelight,
they come to sit with me.

the first of these is tall and thin
with hollow cheeks, and a toothless grin,
a ghastly tare, and scraggly hair,
and an ugly lump for a chin.

the second of these is short and fat
with beady eyes, like a starving rat-
he was soaked in sin to his oily skin,
and verminous, at that

the crouching one is of ape-like plan,
formed like a beast that resembled man:
a freakish thing, with arms a-swing,
and he was the third of that gruesome clan.

the first i stabbed with a chinese knife,
and left on the white beach sand,
with his ghastly stare, and blood-soaked hair,
and an out-flung, claw-like hand;

the fat one stole a crumbling crust,
that he wolfed in his swineish way-
so i left him there, with eyes a-glare,
and his head cut of half-way.

we fought to kill, the brute and i,
that the one that lived might eat,
so i killed him too, and made a stew,
and dined on human meat.

and so these three come to visit me,
when without the night winds howl-
the one with the leer, the one with a sneer,
and and one with a brutish scowl;

their lips are dumb, but the three desd come
and crough by the hollow great-
the man that i stabbed, the man that i cut,
and the gruesome thing that i ate.

their lips are sealed, with blood congealed,
but they will ot let me be,
and so they haunt, grim, ghastly, and gaunt,
till death shall set me free.

i have three friends, three faithful friends,
more faithful could not be-
and every night, by the dim firelight,
they come to sit with me.

Eyepoke said...

Hey Bruce- why were you writing on a pad? hahaha get it? You said PAD.

Eyepoke said...

GROSS

Dana Cheryl said...

Hey Bruce,

You should give us the gist of the poem. What does it mean to you and why do you love it so much?

Louis Lamour is a literary genius in my humble opinion.

Eyepoke said...

Well its pretty basic in my mind- this guy killed three other guys over th course of his life (and ate one of them) and now for, some reason, he can't stop thinking aboout them. Its just cool.

Bruce said...

John, you have suddenly turned into a third gradder.(a pad? gross!) but yes, loui rocks, and his poem is just what john explained. and cool

Dana Cheryl said...

Yes but why do you like it? Not that I'm saying you shouldn't. I like it too.

It's just usually the topic of murder & cannibalism isn't anthologized and shared. People get arrested think Jeffery Dahmer. We as a society are sickened by it. Yet not so much in this case. What's the difference? Just wondering aloud basically...

Bruce said...

you wouldnt be a cannibal it the situation was rite(or wrong depending on how you want to look at it)? i would do it. i even know what cuts of meat i would go for first.

Dana Cheryl said...

Remind me never to go camping with ya'll... :)

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